It occurs to me that there's not much of the fic actually left. We should be heading towards the grand finale, but instead we're putzing around with three naked girls and a pair of delinquents with the real villains nowhere in sight. Apparently the author fails pacing as comprehensively as he fails every other aspect of the writer's craft.

( Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 23 continued... )

Well, here's another chapter.( Read more... )

In which everyone is naked and it's talked about a surprising amount considering that it's supposed to be no big deal.

( Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 22 )